What a Steal

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He ran two fingers along the side of the plush purple top hat. Luxurious, smooth velvet slipped by, darkening as he changed the orientation of the fibres. $9.99 down to 99c. What a steal!

Someone knocked into him from behind. No apology. The only thing madder than the prices were the sale-grabbing shoppers.

Afterword

The mission was to write a story of exactly 53 words about ‘madness’. 

I played with a number of ideas, including writing through the lens of a character who is a little mad (think of, say, the Mad Hatter in Alice in Wonderland).

Aside: Did you know that the phrase “mad as a hatter” came from hatters suffering from mercury poisoning, which they were exposed to during the hat-making process?

Instead, I put on my thinking hat (see what I did there? – no, don’t groan!) and came up with something more out of left field.

Photo attribution: thanks to Allison Christine on Unsplash.

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